Talk:Judith's blog FabulousGünther/@comment-85.177.88.144-20140831160844

Dear Soso,

Here the things I changed:

First I changed ...the topic "Australia" now in school... to ...the topic "Australia" in school right now.

Then, I changed 'Blogs aren't mine' to 'I don't like blogs that much'.

I also took away some commas and those strange arrows.

Then, in line three, I changed 'to' to 'do'.

In line four I wrote 'such a long time' instead of 'a so long time'.

In line five I added 'both' because otherwise it sounds like she has two fathers and a mother. (Parents and a father)

I changed the sentence 'Do you had to get used to blabla...' to 'Did you have to get used to blabla...'

Then I added 'old' in line seven and took away the 'are' because either you say 'you are staying' or 'you stay'. No combining.

I hope everything I changed is right.

Yours, Laura