Talk:Comment on Judith's blog by Charmaine/@comment-77.12.35.225-20140831125747

Dear Charmaine,

At the first line I see a big mistake. Write it so: ... 15 years old.

I have many Hobbies.

for example is to dance.

I love it so much.

Line seven and eight:

The first question is:

Do you like surfing?

Is surfing difficult?

Line nine :

Wich language do you like more, english or german?

Line ten :

At last, could you say me more about your life?

And you don't have the 5W's in your text. Look at the next time closely. ;)

In love your, Vivi :)