Talk:Judith in Australia/@comment-85.179.151.102-20140831103608

Dear Vivian,

I saw at the beginning a better possibility to write the beginning.

Instead of " To Judith: Hi,... " you can write " Dear Judith, ... " or " Hi Judith ".

With the sentence four you have forgotten a word.

You have forgotten the word " with ".

The correct sentence would be called " I go to the Tagore-Gymnasium. "

I saw two mistakes with the sentence with the bird and the snake.

You have forgotten a word and once you have not followed the tense.

The correct sentence would be called : " As you was in the camp for 5 days with the bird and the snake, wasn't it dangerous?

And the last mistake which i saw was with the sentence twelve.

It means instead of " onto ", " into ".

Love, Charmaine :-)