Talk:Comment on Judith´s blog by Lara/@comment-94.134.215.101-20140830081543

Dear Lara,

I read your comment and have a few things that I would change. I am just beginning now.

In the first sentence I would write: "I live in Berlin and go to the Tagore Gymnasium", because I think the secound " I " isn't fitting in this place.

"What are you doing with your friends when you're not in school?" The article "the" doesn't matches in this sentence.

The next thing is apperently a missspelling. I think you mean " It's very cool that you can go surfing."

The last thing is " It would be nice if you'll answer this" or   " It would be nice if you would answer this.

The first thing is grammer. The secound one just sounds nicer!

Thanks for your comment.

Love, Marie