Talk:First comment/@comment-217.247.67.161-20140829072448/@comment-25007539-20140901154724

Salut Laura,

Here are my corrections (a bit late because I can't handle this side...sorry for this):

-" Maybe you could tell me something about Australia because I like to now more about it." I would write "I'd like to know..."

-"Did you see dolphins? Maybe you could take a picture because I like dolphins." I think it sounds better, if you replace the second "dolphins" with "Them" ("I like them very much.")

-"What animals in Australia do you like? " I would write : "Are there some animals you like?"

-" I just like Koalas too. I heard a cd about koalas an I´ve got a plush koala." To much "koala"; "I herad a CD about them and got a plush."

-"In my life skills lessons I could eat kangaroo meat." "We were aloud to try/to eat kangaroo meat.", I think it sound better :)

I hope I didn't made a mistake,

Soso